
Here’s a quick writing tip to improve your content right away.
You may have heard a politician facing a scandal say, “Mistakes were made.”
This sounds awkward and like they’re avoiding something. Why? It’s using passive voice.
Here’s a test for passive voice: If your sentence makes (silly) sense when you add “by zombies,” it’s in passive voice. You may want to consider revising.
- Passive: Mistakes were made (by zombies).
- Active, centering the thing that happened: Mistakes happened.
- Active, centering the responsible party: I made mistakes.
Active is often better, but not always! Passive voice can be useful when your intention is to show that someone didn’t have a say in something – that it happened to them.
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