Are you avoiding zombies in your writing?

Here’s a quick writing tip to improve your content right away.

You may have heard a politician facing a scandal say, “Mistakes were made.” 

This sounds awkward and like they’re avoiding something. Why? It’s using passive voice.  

Here’s a test for passive voice: If your sentence makes (silly) sense when you add “by zombies,” it’s in passive voice. You may want to consider revising. 

Active is often better, but not always! Passive voice can be useful when your intention is to show that someone didn’t have a say in something – that it happened to them. 

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